From 598caf6f78aced57490654112d5d7c5bb2180059 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: sven <sven@leftxs.org>
Date: Wed, 22 Mar 2023 16:53:41 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Adjust quick start

---
 docs/content/getting-started/quick-start.md | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/content/getting-started/quick-start.md b/docs/content/getting-started/quick-start.md
index e1883040d..e4007910d 100644
--- a/docs/content/getting-started/quick-start.md
+++ b/docs/content/getting-started/quick-start.md
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 ---
 title: "Traefik Getting Started Quickly"
-description: "Looking to get started with Traefik Proxy quickly? Read the technical documentation to learn a simple use case that leverages Docker."
+description: "Looking to get started with Traefik Proxy quickly? Read the technical documentation to see a basic use case that leverages Docker."
 ---
 
 # Quick Start
 
-A Simple Use Case Using Docker
+A Basic Use Case Using Docker
 {: .subtitle }
 
 ![quickstart-diagram](../assets/img/quickstart-diagram.png)
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ version: '3'
 
 services:
   reverse-proxy:
-    # The official v2 Traefik docker image
+    # The official v3 Traefik Docker image
     image: traefik:v3.0
-    # Enables the web UI and tells Traefik to listen to docker
+    # Enables the web UI and tells Traefik to listen to Docker
     command: --api.insecure=true --providers.docker
     ports:
       # The HTTP port
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ services:
       - "traefik.http.routers.whoami.rule=Host(`whoami.docker.localhost`)"
 ```
 
-The above defines `whoami`: a simple web service that outputs information about the machine it is deployed on (its IP address, host, and so on).
+The above defines [`whoami`](https://github.com/traefik/whoami "Link to whoami app on GitHub"), a web service that outputs information about the machine it is deployed on (its IP address, host, etc.).
 
 Start the `whoami` service with the following command:
 
@@ -71,9 +71,9 @@ Start the `whoami` service with the following command:
 docker-compose up -d whoami
 ```
 
-Go back to your browser (`http://localhost:8080/api/rawdata`) and see that Traefik has automatically detected the new container and updated its own configuration.
+Browse `http://localhost:8080/api/rawdata` and see that Traefik has automatically detected the new container and updated its own configuration.
 
-When Traefik detects new services, it creates the corresponding routes so you can call them ... _let's see!_  (Here, we're using curl)
+When Traefik detects new services, it creates the corresponding routes, so you can call them ... _let's see!_  (Here, we're using curl)
 
 ```shell
 curl -H Host:whoami.docker.localhost http://127.0.0.1
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ Run more instances of your `whoami` service with the following command:
 docker-compose up -d --scale whoami=2
 ```
 
-Go back to your browser (`http://localhost:8080/api/rawdata`) and see that Traefik has automatically detected the new instance of the container.
+Browse to `http://localhost:8080/api/rawdata` and see that Traefik has automatically detected the new instance of the container.
 
 Finally, see that Traefik load-balances between the two instances of your service by running the following command twice:
 
@@ -119,6 +119,6 @@ IP: 172.27.0.4
 
 !!! question "Where to Go Next?"
 
-    Now that you have a basic understanding of how Traefik can automatically create the routes to your services and load balance them, it is time to dive into [the documentation](/) and let Traefik work for you!
+    Now that you have a basic understanding of how Traefik can automatically create the routes to your services and load balance them, it is time to dive into [the documentation](/ "Link to the docs landing page") and let Traefik work for you!
 
 {!traefik-for-business-applications.md!}
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